Narrative writing

 In class, we watched a short film called ruin. once we had finished watching ruin our teacher told us to go and write a narrative about the short film so off we went writing here is my writing on ruin.  I have been working on showing not telling in my writing

Orientation describes setting and charter.

Emerging from the moist and crisp air the scorching rays of the sun stink the hotel room.

Roots overgrowing the streets and cracked holes in the road.

A lone suspect shoved a canister of a giant building looking for an electronic device

that he had been searching for a quarantine facility to try save haven

otherwise, haven will be blown to pieces. 

The problem what goes wrong

While Zack was trying to find a tablet he discovered an x345, while he was searching for the quarantine facility. He noticed a sound around the corner,

And once he noticed it was his enemy coming for him. Zack ran for his  ktm 750

he started it up ´broom.´ Zack went flying down the highway driving speedy

  100 miles per hour. then the airplane started to take him down by sending a little drone with a little machine gun. Zack went through  a  gloomy pitch-black tunnel, then finally

Zack pulled out his katana and used his power to make it strong and then he stuck his katana into the airplane and it exploded to pieces.

 Complication what makes things tricker

Zack was looking for his family in a quarantine facility. Because these aliens separated

Zack from his own whanau. Therefore he wanted to get them back and keep his family safe from

those who took his family away from him.

Conclusion

In the end, Zack ended up finding his family and more people in the quarantine facility.

Everyone ended up calling Zack a

superhero because he saved their lives and the town did

not end up getting destroyed