So I have been reading this book called miracle pets and I have been reading this book for the past month and it is a really interesting book and here is a little bit of what I wrote that I did about it.
Author Allan Zullo
So For the past month have been reading Miracle pets that were written by Allan Zullo, what it talks about is based on humans and animals. so on one of the paragraphs, it talks about when this dog had ran away from his home and gone to the beach and then he decided to walk up a big steep hill and then he couldn’t get back down because he was really scared so he didn’t come back down.
Hi Hawaiki,
ReplyDeleteYou told us the text author and title using capital letters. Good. You gave some detail, but did not summarise the text. What is it mostly about 'humans and pets' needs a bit more explaining. Lastly - you know how to use full stops, so use them.
what are you doing today?
ReplyDeleteHi is mana okay to play with?
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