Here is a report. I wrote it recently. In class, we are focusing on report writing and using correct punctuation.I'm not confident yet but I'm getting there. I think it was a bit hard.........
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Rugby is a sport” the best sport in the world”
Event 1
Rugby is a sport that every boy likes to play. For example, are a lot of clubs that you can play rugby for.
1 Kaikohe,2 Moerewa,3 Kerikeri,4 Taheke crushers, 5 Taiamai
Event 2
Clubs to watch are kaikohe lions and Taheke crushers because they are really good.
Event 3 - people who are great at rugby
For example some really skillful people in the world like Richie mo'unga,beauden barret ,Dan carter. The teams to watch are kaikohe and moerewa. .
Hawaiki, one of things I admire about you is your willingness to give everything a go. You are very capable, keep taking risks as a writer. Adding more detail and making improvements to punctuation and spelling as you notice them is a goal for Term 4.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback whaea lana
ReplyDeleteI reccont if you wrote more about you but in third person
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