This term my class has been learning about the key things about persuasive writing. We did these picture maps to help us remember the text that my teach wrote. This is my picture mapping and I think it's good enough for me who kind of doesn't know how to draw. Down bottom is what I tried to draw and do.
Here is my picture map.
In class, we have been learning about figurative language such as personification. We also have learned some: other sentences structure and responses to feedback to improve our writing.
The luge
In the mid week of the holidays, Nga Hoia O Ihu Karaiti went down to Rotorua for a Christian kapa haka festival called “Te Kaihanga O Nga Whetu”.We all went back home to get and pack our stuff and then wet back up at 9 o'clock to discuss about the trip.”we didn’t leave until 2 o clock. “Finally Matua Teanara arrived” i said as he was turning into the school driveway he turned around in the basketball court then we packed the vans then off we went.
Arriving to the Luge
So when we got to Rotorua we went to the luge, The hill was like Mt Cook- massive! WE went up a lift up to the top then we went to this man and he explained about the go karts. We walked into the shop and Whaea Micthell and Matua Komene went up to the counter and paid the money so that we could go and have some fun. Then we went to the go karts and went down a massive hill on the go karts.
After going the go karts Komene and I went to the zipline,It was scary.Some people like heights ;others find heights terrifying, The zipline is this wire going down the hill that was 43 m down the hill. The thing that I was attached to the wire was a clip then they opened the gates and off we went. Zooming down the air like superman. They have this white thing on the zipline. It was to stop us from being smashed at the end .I was really scared at the beginning but in the end it was fun as.
Going to the luge was very fun, especially going down the hill on the go karts and then catching a ride on a lift carrying us back up to the beginning and then going on it again. If I ever got the chance to go back there I would take that chance and yeah it was fun. If you go own the zipline get watery eyes and the ending isn't bad.
Meeting back up in the hall
After meeting up we did we did lot’s of cleaning in the hall so that it was clean for the church people,then we discussed about the trip.After cleaning we did a little bit of work on our bracket then we stayed up till 1 o'clock then went to sleep for 1 hour.Then we woke up at 2 o clock and then waited for the drivers.
